Task P - Main task - 1st draft

Today the rest of my class were shown a screening of my first draft, here are some of the positives and criticisms of the overall viewing:

Positives: 

• Some good cinematography used
• Locations worked well
• Edited well with lip syincing all in correct order

Neggatives:

• Shot length of most shots need to be reduced
• Need more of a variety of shots
• The ending needs work as there is limited footage shown